Salve! Yassou!
And now that we’ve had a few words of introduction, we’d like to move on to answer the big questions—“What’s the point of this blog?”, “Why bother?”, “How on earth does this concern me?”
Well, we mean to celebrate something with this blog. Something resonant with all of us— we mean to celebrate and nurture our childhoods. “Childhoods?!” you ask. “What do those have to do with this?” Childhood is, well-agreed to be, the best time of life. A time of wide-eyed innocence, curiosity and above all wonder at this magnificent and exciting world around us.
And that is where Science comes in. There is still a child in all of us, the same child who once asked "Why is the sky blue?", and although that child’s questions may change and grow bigger, more complex, the simple awe and curiosity remains. The Lord’s creation is truly wonderful, and a hunger to learn more about it comes naturally. Science provides us the means to feed that hunger, and we hope that you join us as we nurture our inner children while documenting our final months in Science class.
Yassou curious childrens, I mean, children!
ReplyDeleteHere are your scores:
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The post was well written and engaging. However, my eyes are very keen to text formatting. You've missed a lot of formatting standards (you did not indent properly, not enough spacing, the font is too big, you have no title, etc.). You did not give proper credit also to your image source. Please do improve also the other technical elements of your blog (e.g. font size, font type, etc.). 'Til your next post curious kids!
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I just hope that in the end, curiosity wont kill the cat. ;D